Talk:Plushie Ponies/@comment-25608626-20150228153520

I edited this page because of grammar but a few things stuck out to me as weird:

Royal Plushie Ponies you say are immortal (which means EVER LIVING NO MATTER WHAT) but they can die of natural causes? It makes no sense. You should probably put, 'They don't die easily, they cannot be stabbed to death, etc. but they can die of natural causes, starvation, old age etc.'

Something like that would be better and makes more sense.

I also don't get why you need to put how their body works. Personal nitpick I guess.

Anyway, I still like the idea of the species, hope you carry on with them! They're really cute!